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Hi He Puna Kawenga!I'm Vasati, I love the first one by Jasmise, because It has good descriptive words -scorching hot and huff.It hooks me in and puts picture in my head!
Hi Room 4 I really love your emotion poems because there all so descriptive and colourful. They all tell how you guys would feel with those emotions. I love ALL of them!